Fast-paced dragon combat fantasy that continues the story directly"The Law of Preservation of Life(acquaintance with the story is necessary, otherwise you won’t understand anything in the novel).
Control shot
- 01. Written by: 2010
- 02.Type: Novel
- 03. Genre: Fantastic
- 04. Volume: 9 a. l., 340175 sign.
- 05. Issued: No
- 06. Language: Russian
Annotation:
...Once, in a cycle "Dictators"comparatively small novel included"Control shot"- a book written in two days, under the influence of the strongest emotional shock that I experienced when I read the Majipur cycle by R. Silverberg, where dragons are industrially slaughtered for meat. The novel was conceived as anti-war, it was supposed to horrify, intimidate and cause disgust. ..
Alas, as often happens, I greatly overestimated the "readership", and only a few understood the idea of the book. But loud freaks from the fair, dirty-mouthed nationalists, brainless epigones and, in general, such an amount of dirt immediately jumped out into the world that I deleted this book from the cycle and for ten years explained to everyone that it no longer exists, and the events described there - not happened.
In vain. If a person is a pig, he will simply like to swim in the mud, no matter how many times you repeat that the swamp has dried up a long time ago.
I was so tired of it that I decided to put an end to it once and for all. Before you is a new book based on the former novel "Control shot".
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This is one of the best stories I have ever seen, especially from the Dictators series.
March 10, 2023
Fabulous
March 10, 2023
The Dictators cycle is one of my favorite cycles. It is always a pleasure to receive such gifts from the author. for which many thanks. it is very strongly written, and for an adult, however, in my opinion, the end is somewhat ragged ... the style of presentation is impressive, I could not tear myself away - I read it excitedly.
this is all for now, but this is the first impression and it is the most important. thanks again! 😉
March 10, 2023
I have been waiting for Stars on Wings for many years. And just today I downloaded - what is on 50% - from completely rewritten fragments that were previously intended for "Stars on Wings".
Well, did you really wait…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………..
March 10, 2023
What can I say . Well written. Atmospheric. Lots of pianos. And of course not without malice. The author somehow managed to avoid some of the nuances before, but then he plunged into them. Why attack in the direction of SHUmil? Silly. amused by the phrase said by the dragon, “You can starve me, you can shoot me, but I won’t eat intelligent creatures.” and literally after a while, “I ate the man. I was not in a position to think about morality. I needed to survive and find my jailers. At any cost." What a quick change of priorities, what a great passage about self-worth 😉 five points. Another dirty, vulgar, evil piece of Hell broke out of the writer's soul. And if THIS is exactly how the story about dictators should end .. then it's time to bury Lockhart. Peace be upon him.
IMHO
March 10, 2023
Started reading. I barely sent myself to sleep yesterday - do not come off 🙂
March 10, 2023
I am very glad that the idea was not abandoned and a new book appeared. I will read it with great anticipation.
March 10, 2023
I really liked the “first version”, very atmospheric, heavy. The topic is very close.
I will read the “new version” as soon as I have time.
Thanks to the Author.
March 10, 2023
Perfect!!! A wonderful book. You read and you don't notice how it ends. A good continuation for the cycle ... I really liked it very much. Hopefully this won't be the last book in The Dictators. =)
March 10, 2023
On the whole, I really liked the book. The ending is disgusting. It completely deprives the meaning of all previous books, deprives the meaning of all theories about time that were expressed earlier in past events. It was interesting to read.
By the way, why at the beginning of the Law of Preservation of Life did the Wolf have dreams about how he and his family were cut up? A very clear emphasis was placed on these dreams and, to be honest, I thought that at the end of the Shot it would happen .. but no .. Then why?
Thank you
March 10, 2023
There was such a fuss around the original KV (what was the essence of the conflict, I still don’t understand) that, unable to resist, I searched for the original for half a day.
What can I say. The original (especially against the background of other books) seems to be complete rubbish. It's annoying that the dragons, in their desire for revenge, actually stooped to the level of their enemies. The dragons, who for generations knew the word "war" only from the history books, have become the largest stronghold of militarism in the galaxy. The dragons, who went into a state of shock at the sight of senseless cruelty, competed to see who could kill the most “macaques” (those people behaved similarly, but this is not about them). Wing, the main peacekeeper in the galaxy, has become the best executioner in the galaxy. If the book was supposed to be anti-war, it failed: only one pole was shown, the pole of the avenging dragons. Throughout the book, they did not even give a reason to doubt the correctness of their methods.
The new book is kinder, and, in general, turned out better than the original.
Everything would be perfect if not for two “buts”. This is the reason for the start of the war, and the reason for its prevention. I will not go into details, spoilers are the eighth deadly sin (I apologize for the spoilers on the original, but there was no other way), I will only say that the first was frankly far-fetched, the second became a god from the car.
However, rewriting books, especially ten years ago, is generally a thankless task. The worldview changes a lot over time, and rebuilding something is always an order of magnitude more difficult than creating from scratch. And if you redo something from the middle ... It's like dismantling one wall during repairs. The chance that everything will collapse is dangerously high.