Fast-paced dragon combat fantasy that continues the story directly"The Law of Preservation of Life(acquaintance with the story is necessary, otherwise you won’t understand anything in the novel).
Control shot
- 01. Written by: 2010
- 02.Type: Novel
- 03. Genre: Fantastic
- 04. Volume: 9 a. l., 340175 sign.
- 05. Issued: No
- 06. Language: Russian
Annotation:
...Once, in a cycle "Dictators"comparatively small novel included"Control shot"- a book written in two days, under the influence of the strongest emotional shock that I experienced when I read the Majipur cycle by R. Silverberg, where dragons are industrially slaughtered for meat. The novel was conceived as anti-war, it was supposed to horrify, intimidate and cause disgust. ..
Alas, as often happens, I greatly overestimated the "readership", and only a few understood the idea of the book. But loud freaks from the fair, dirty-mouthed nationalists, brainless epigones and, in general, such an amount of dirt immediately jumped out into the world that I deleted this book from the cycle and for ten years explained to everyone that it no longer exists, and the events described there - not happened.
In vain. If a person is a pig, he will simply like to swim in the mud, no matter how many times you repeat that the swamp has dried up a long time ago.
I was so tired of it that I decided to put an end to it once and for all. Before you is a new book based on the former novel "Control shot".
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March 10, 2023
Это один из лучших рассказов из всех, что я видел, особенно из серии "Диктаторы".
March 10, 2023
Fabulous
March 10, 2023
цикл Диктаторы вообще один из моих любимейших циклов. и всегда приятно получать такие подарки от автора. за что огромнейшее спасибо. очень сильно написано, и по взрослому однако на мой взгляд конец несколько рваный... стиль изложения впечатляет, не мог оторваться - взахлеб прочитал.
this is all for now, but this is the first impression and it is the most important. thanks again! 😉
March 10, 2023
Я ждал "Звезды на крыльях" много лет. И вот только сегодня скачал - то, что состоит на 50% - из полностью переписанных фрагментов, ранее предназначавших ся для "Звезд на крыльях".
Ну что-же - неужели дождался..............................................................................................................................................................
March 10, 2023
Что я могу сказать . Написано неплохо . Атмосферно. Много роялей . И конечно никак без злобы . Автор как то умудрялся избегать до этого некоторых ньюансов а тут таки окунулся в них . К чему выпад в сторону ШУмила ? Глупо . позабавила фраза сказанная драконом " - Можете уморить меня голодом, можете пристрелить - но есть разумных существ я не стану." и буквально через некоторое время " Человека я съел. Не в том я был состоянии, чтобы вспоминать о морали. Мне нужно было выжить и найти своих тюремщиков. Любой ценой." Какая быстра смена приоритетов , какой великолепный пассаж о собственной ценности 😉 пять баллов . Очередной грязный, пошлый , злой кусочек Ада вырвался из души писателя . И если именно ЭТО то как должна заканчиватся история про диктаторов .. то время хоронить Локхарда . Мир его праху .
IMHO
March 10, 2023
Начала читать. Еле себя спать вчера отправила - не оторваться 🙂
March 10, 2023
I am very glad that the idea was not abandoned and a new book appeared. I will read it with great anticipation.
March 10, 2023
Мне очень понравилась "первая версия", очень атмосферная, тяжолая. Тема очень близная..
Прочитаю "новую версию" как только будет время.
Thanks to the Author.
March 10, 2023
Perfect!!! Замечательная книга. Читаешь, и не замечаешь, как она заканчивается. Хорошее продолжение для цикла... Очень очень понравилось. Надеюсь это будет не последней книгой в "Диктаторах". =)
March 10, 2023
On the whole, I really liked the book. The ending is disgusting. It completely deprives the meaning of all previous books, deprives the meaning of all theories about time that were expressed earlier in past events. It was interesting to read.
By the way, why at the beginning of the Law of Preservation of Life did the Wolf have dreams about how he and his family were cut up? A very clear emphasis was placed on these dreams and, to be honest, I thought that at the end of the Shot it would happen .. but no .. Then why?
Thank you
March 10, 2023
There was such a fuss around the original KV (what was the essence of the conflict, I still don’t understand) that, unable to resist, I searched for the original for half a day.
Что я могу сказать. Оригинал (особенно на фоне других книг) кажется полной чернухой. Напрягает, что драконы, в своем стремлении отомстить, фактически опустились до уровня своих врагов. Драконы, поколениями знавшие слово "война" лишь по учебникам истории, превратились в крупнейший оплот милитаризма в галактике. Драконы, которые впадали в состояние шока при виде бессмысленной жестокости, соревновались, кто убьет больше "макак" (те люди вели себя аналогично, но речь-то не о них). Винг, главный миротворец в галактике, стал лучшим палачом в галактике. Если книга должна была стать антивоенной, то это не удалось: показан был лишь один полюс, полюс драконов-мстителей. За всю книгу не дали даже повода усомниться в правильности их методов.
The new book is kinder, and, in general, turned out better than the original.
Все было бы вообще идеально, если бы не два "но". Это причина начала войны, и причина ее предотвращения. Не буду вдаваться в детали, спойлеры есть восьмой смертный грех (прошу прощения за спойлеры по оригиналу, но там иначе было никак), скажу лишь, что первое было откровенно притянуто за уши, второе же стало богом из машины.
Впрочем, переписывать книги, тем более десятилетней давности – вообще неблагодарное дело. Мировосприятие со временем сильно меняется, да и перестроить что-то всегда на порядок сложнее, чем создать с нуля. А если переделывать что-то из середины... Это как во время ремонта разобрать одну стену. Шанс, что все рухнет, опасно велик.