Fast-paced dragon combat fantasy that continues the story directly"The Law of Preservation of Life(acquaintance with the story is necessary, otherwise you won’t understand anything in the novel).
Control shot
- 01. Written by: 2010
- 02.Type: Novel
- 03. Genre: Fantastic
- 04. Volume: 9 a. l., 340175 sign.
- 05. Issued: No
- 06. Language: Russian
Annotation:
...Once, in a cycle "Dictators"comparatively small novel included"Control shot"- a book written in two days, under the influence of the strongest emotional shock that I experienced when I read the Majipur cycle by R. Silverberg, where dragons are industrially slaughtered for meat. The novel was conceived as anti-war, it was supposed to horrify, intimidate and cause disgust. ..
Alas, as often happens, I greatly overestimated the "readership", and only a few understood the idea of the book. But loud freaks from the fair, dirty-mouthed nationalists, brainless epigones and, in general, such an amount of dirt immediately jumped out into the world that I deleted this book from the cycle and for ten years explained to everyone that it no longer exists, and the events described there - not happened.
In vain. If a person is a pig, he will simply like to swim in the mud, no matter how many times you repeat that the swamp has dried up a long time ago.
I was so tired of it that I decided to put an end to it once and for all. Before you is a new book based on the former novel "Control shot".
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March 10, 2023
This is one of the best stories I've ever seen, especially from the Dictators series.
March 10, 2023
Fabulous
March 10, 2023
The Dictators series is generally one of my favorite series. and it’s always a pleasure to receive such gifts from the author. Thank you very much for that. It’s very well written, and for an adult, however, in my opinion, the ending is somewhat jagged... the style of presentation is impressive, I couldn’t put it down - I read it avidly.
this is all for now, but this is the first impression and it is the most important. thanks again! 😉
March 10, 2023
I've been waiting for "Stars on Wings" for many years. And just today I downloaded what is on the 50% - from completely rewritten fragments previously intended for “Stars on Wings”.
Well, did you really wait................................................... ........................................................ ........................................................ ...............
March 10, 2023
What can I say . Well written. Atmospheric. Lots of pianos. And of course, not without anger. The author somehow managed to avoid some nuances before, but now he plunged into them. Why the attack towards Shumila? Stupid. I was amused by the phrase said by the dragon, “You can starve me, you can shoot me, but I won’t eat intelligent creatures.” and literally after a while “I ate a man. I was not in a state to remember morality. I needed to survive and find my jailers. At any cost.” What a quick change of priorities, what a magnificent passage about one’s own value 😉 five points. Another dirty, vulgar, evil piece of Hell escaped from the writer’s soul. And if THIS is exactly how the story about dictators should end... then it’s time to bury Lockhart. Peace to his ashes.
IMHO
March 10, 2023
I started reading. I barely sent myself to sleep yesterday - I couldn’t tear myself away :)
March 10, 2023
I am very glad that the idea was not abandoned and a new book appeared. I will read it with great anticipation.
March 10, 2023
I really liked the “first version”, very atmospheric and heavy. The topic is very close..
I'll read the "new version" as soon as I have time.
Thanks to the Author.
March 10, 2023
Perfect!!! A wonderful book. You read it and don’t notice how it ends. A good continuation for the series... I really liked it. I hope this won't be the last book in Dictators. =)
March 10, 2023
On the whole, I really liked the book. The ending is disgusting. It completely deprives the meaning of all previous books, deprives the meaning of all theories about time that were expressed earlier in past events. It was interesting to read.
By the way, why at the beginning of the Law of Preservation of Life did the Wolf have dreams about how he and his family were cut up? A very clear emphasis was placed on these dreams and, to be honest, I thought that at the end of the Shot it would happen .. but no .. Then why?
Thank you
March 10, 2023
There was such a fuss around the original KV (what was the essence of the conflict, I still don’t understand) that, unable to resist, I searched for the original for half a day.
What can I say. The original (especially compared to other books) seems like complete crap. It's annoying that the dragons, in their quest for revenge, have actually sunk to the level of their enemies. Dragons, who for generations knew the word “war” only from history books, have become the largest stronghold of militarism in the galaxy. The dragons, who fell into a state of shock at the sight of senseless cruelty, competed to see who could kill more “macaques” (those people behaved similarly, but this is not about them). Wing, the galaxy's premier peacemaker, has become the galaxy's best executioner. If the book was supposed to be anti-war, then it failed: only one pole was shown, the pole of the avenging dragons. Throughout the entire book they did not even give us any reason to doubt the correctness of their methods.
The new book is kinder, and, in general, turned out better than the original.
Everything would be perfect if not for two “buts”. This is the reason the war started, and the reason it was prevented. I won’t go into details, spoilers are the eighth deadly sin (I apologize for the spoilers on the original, but there was no other way), I’ll just say that the first was frankly far-fetched, while the second became deus ex machina.
However, rewriting books, especially ones that were ten years old, is generally a thankless task. Worldviews change a lot over time, and rebuilding something is always an order of magnitude more difficult than creating it from scratch. And if you redo something from the middle... It’s like taking apart one wall during renovation. The chance that everything will collapse is dangerously high.